Comments on: how to stay happy: note 33 to myself http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/ the dark vivid tales of a part turtle, part butterfly. Fri, 23 Jul 2010 01:08:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: acousticrhythm http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/#comment-1109 acousticrhythm Wed, 04 Mar 2009 05:12:56 +0000 http://flyturtlefly.wordpress.com/?p=178#comment-1109 you said,"There’s a quiet struggle involved in breaking free of yourself" I say, the struggle begins when your cagedself is not yet ready to be free. I am all too familiar with the contended struggle but each, I slowy come out of the dark, exposing myself to more light. I have no idea how this one escaped me...perhaps it needed to be saved for last in order to have my full undivided ;) lissa, what can i say that i already haven't your psyche stretches unlike most, finally figured out how to add to my blogroll and you're now on it, yah!!!! until we share space again, live well~filter freely you said,”There’s a quiet struggle
involved in breaking free of yourself”

I say, the struggle begins when your cagedself is not yet ready to be free.

I am all too familiar with the contended struggle but each, I slowy come out of the dark, exposing myself to more light.

I have no idea how this one escaped me…perhaps it needed to be saved for last in order to have my full undivided ;)

lissa,
what can i say that i already haven’t
your psyche stretches unlike most,

finally figured out how to add to my blogroll
and you’re now on it, yah!!!!

until we share space again,
live well~filter freely

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/#comment-254 Crafty Green Poet Thu, 08 May 2008 13:14:57 +0000 http://flyturtlefly.wordpress.com/?p=178#comment-254 I like the idea of sweet revenge fairy tales and the ending too, excellent I like the idea of sweet revenge fairy tales and the ending too, excellent

]]> By: Paul http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/#comment-248 Paul Tue, 06 May 2008 09:54:32 +0000 http://flyturtlefly.wordpress.com/?p=178#comment-248 You created a really tight downward spiral in your poem in rhtyhm and in tone, it gets tighter and then relaxes out like a single slow heartbeat, and its quite intense in the middle there, the letting go at the end is a kind of compassionate gesture, almost ironic twist, but the poem has a structure which reflects the mind event it describes which is how it should be, yayay, see i knew you could write, you have a natural instrument, beautiful tone and control and it is entirely up to you how you use it, the more you try the better you will get at the simple natural things as well, so i reckon you have all the potential for a great career as a writer and i'll be interested to see you go whoosh past me at a million miles, cool, You created a really tight downward spiral in your poem in rhtyhm and in tone, it gets tighter and then relaxes out like a single slow heartbeat, and its quite intense in the middle there, the letting go at the end is a kind of compassionate gesture, almost ironic twist, but the poem has a structure which reflects the mind event it describes which is how it should be, yayay, see i knew you could write, you have a natural instrument, beautiful tone and control and it is entirely up to you how you use it, the more you try the better you will get at the simple natural things as well, so i reckon you have all the potential for a great career as a writer and i’ll be interested to see you go whoosh past me at a million miles, cool,

]]> By: Scot http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/#comment-247 Scot Tue, 06 May 2008 02:06:46 +0000 http://flyturtlefly.wordpress.com/?p=178#comment-247 great poem--fresh voice. Check my comments--don't throw this out lightly. Thanks for the visit. great poem–fresh voice. Check my comments–don’t throw this out lightly. Thanks for the visit.

]]> By: tysdaddy http://flyturtlefly.com/2008/05/05/how-to-be-happy-memo-33-to-myself/#comment-246 tysdaddy Tue, 06 May 2008 01:27:18 +0000 http://flyturtlefly.wordpress.com/?p=178#comment-246 This starts with a bang and never lets go. Amazing poetry, Lissa. Congratulations! This starts with a bang and never lets go. Amazing poetry, Lissa. Congratulations!

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