Comments on: cheery rainbow piece

By: acousticrhythm

acousticrhythm — Fri, 27 Feb 2009 00:02:23 +0000

and my soul retreated to a familiar space the entire time of reading this one…
piercingly deep~

By: nathan1313

nathan1313 — Thu, 05 Jun 2008 11:55:24 +0000

You’ve got a real talent for capturing voices and setting scenes. I like this a lot.

By: Tina Trivett

Tina Trivett — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 16:32:16 +0000

Wonderful writing….of course.

Maybe when you fall asleep tonight,
you can dream about yourself,
broken repeatedly then put back together –
a dream that includes everything you’ve
done to me. Maybe feeling what I feel
can change you.

Very thoughtful..

By: Cynthia

Cynthia — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 17:45:57 +0000

“that you will become someone new to me,
someone worldly or good for me”…omgosh!
this is what i feel someone feels about me,
that i should someone change yet remain the
girl he writes poems about.
as always the delicate way you write makes
your poetry that more profound.

By: Katie

Katie — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 16:06:05 +0000

I love love love your writing… it always leaves me somewhat lonely and longing… it always makes me feel.

Love it.